*sigh* Badly written love story.
This is what the story was supposed to be:
Kaylyn was trained to exterminate all the Malryx on the surface of the Earth, but no one was prepared for the consequences of her actually defeating all evil on the planet. When she did, it created a terrible unbalance in the society and now, she doesn't have a lot of choices left. She has to bring the Malryx back.
Sounds exciting right?
This is what it really was:
Kaylyn loves Jorrin and the feelings are mutual, but Marsa, her best friend, loves Jorrin too. Kaylyn ends up with Jorrin and Marsa has to get out of the picture so Falor decided to make her evil.The End.
Kaylyn was constantly obsessed with Jorrin like it's not even possible.
She was so needy that I actually felt a little disgusted and sorry for her.
Character development and world-building were very borderline. Do I have to add that the writing felt like one of a ten year old?
Bleh. Don't read this. Not worth it.
1.5 Stars
This is what the story was supposed to be:
Kaylyn was trained to exterminate all the Malryx on the surface of the Earth, but no one was prepared for the consequences of her actually defeating all evil on the planet. When she did, it created a terrible unbalance in the society and now, she doesn't have a lot of choices left. She has to bring the Malryx back.
Sounds exciting right?
This is what it really was:
Kaylyn loves Jorrin and the feelings are mutual, but Marsa, her best friend, loves Jorrin too. Kaylyn ends up with Jorrin and Marsa has to get out of the picture so Falor decided to make her evil.The End.
Kaylyn was constantly obsessed with Jorrin like it's not even possible.
She was so needy that I actually felt a little disgusted and sorry for her.
Character development and world-building were very borderline. Do I have to add that the writing felt like one of a ten year old?
Bleh. Don't read this. Not worth it.
1.5 Stars