Boring.
Gideon Marquand has magic powers and everyone wants to steal them from him. When his enemies send over a young girl, he falls in love with her. He tells her that her whole life has been a lie and she believes him. They have lots of sex and she decides to help him defeat the evil people. It was a success. The End.
Plot wise, Magic Revealed was very slow and simple. No complications, no twists, nothing I've never read.
Character wise, meh no connection whatsoever. Author tried too hard to make them seem special, but they aren't.
World Building: close to none.
Writing: I guess it was fine.
*sigh*
Gideon Marquand has magic powers and everyone wants to steal them from him. When his enemies send over a young girl, he falls in love with her. He tells her that her whole life has been a lie and she believes him. They have lots of sex and she decides to help him defeat the evil people. It was a success. The End.
Plot wise, Magic Revealed was very slow and simple. No complications, no twists, nothing I've never read.
Character wise, meh no connection whatsoever. Author tried too hard to make them seem special, but they aren't.
World Building: close to none.
Writing: I guess it was fine.
*sigh*